The story is told in the first person by Jane and moves at a fast pace. McOmber’s debut novel is well written, chilling and spooky, and the plot is highly original. The only technique I quibbled with is the use of Nathan’s journal, which is not only read by Jane to help solve a major puzzle (a little too convenient?) but is also printed in italics, which often goes on for a few pages and gets a little tiresome. But that is indeed a quibble and the story itself is dramatic and intriguing. Jane is a very sympathetic character, and we feel with and for her as she comes to the gravest of understandings of her true nature and the responsibilities that come with this knowledge.
Historical Novel Society
The story is told in the first person by Jane and moves at a fast pace. McOmber’s debut novel is well written, chilling and spooky, and the plot is highly original. The only technique I quibbled with is the use of Nathan’s journal, which is not only read by Jane to help solve a major puzzle (a little too convenient?) but is also printed in italics, which often goes on for a few pages and gets a little tiresome. But that is indeed a quibble and the story itself is dramatic and intriguing. Jane is a very sympathetic character, and we feel with and for her as she comes to the gravest of understandings of her true nature and the responsibilities that come with this knowledge.